Friday, 24 March 2017

Daniel's Fabulous Story

Daniel typed up this story independently! He is learning to stretch his ideas by using conjunctions like "and". He is also adding personal touches to give his stories more feeling and making them interesting. Ka Pai, Daniel!
23/03   Daniel          Diamond and Shiny

We have Diamond and Shiny in our class, they are cool goldfish. One is a boy and one a girl. The goldy, shiny one is smaller and the diamond one is bigger but they look like the same fish. They play hide and seek together and they always hide in the same spot. That spot is behind the scuba diver helmet and they also eat their food there. They got their names because we had a thing where people choose names and we see what name wins. I’m happy they’re in our class.

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